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Dear Sex,

I know we've had some good times together, but we haven't seen each other for a long time (perhaps too long) and I'd like to see you again. Unfortunately, I have some bad news.

There's something you should know. I don't feel the same way as I used to, and I'm sorry. You are a great thing, but...there's someone else. Someone that makes you seem...plain.

Her name is Love. She is a truly wondrous thing to behold, and I've recently become very well acquainted with Love. You will always make me feel good, but something deep within my very soul reaches out when Love calls. The very thought of Love makes me go numb. I thought you were all I needed, but I can't live without Love.

I wish it didn't end up this way, but at the same time, I wish it had happened sooner. I want to see you every now and again, but Love will always be with me when I see you from now on. I'm sure you will appreciate how Love makes our together time feel like something more.

Sincerely,
The Heart
©2009 =duststorm10
:iconduststorm10:

Author's Comments

(I don't know what category this would go in!! D: )

I was feeling nostalgic and going through things I did a long time ago, and I found this little poem and read over it, and I still love it. I'm not the greatest writer but I'm proud of this piece. I'm not sure if this idea has been done before, but if not...sweet. I'm a literary pioneer. *cough*

I was feeling pretty romantic when I wrote this. I wrote from my heart instead of my mind. I don't know if it's good or not, but I'll let you all decide.

Comments


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:iconpeanuttothebutter:
i truly love this. :nod: <3.

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eat your words. i hope you choke.
:iconh-heather:
I liked it a lot... made me feel happy =)

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Heather :heart:
:iconanimepotter4eva:
awesome!

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In memory of Heath Ledger :heart:
:iconduststorm10:
I'm glad. :D

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I know you want what's on my mind
I know you like what's on my mind
I know what eats you up inside
I know you know, you know
Sex Type Thing - Stone Temple Pilots
:iconduststorm10:
Good! :aww: I'd rather not make you feel sad. :lol:

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I know you want what's on my mind
I know you like what's on my mind
I know what eats you up inside
I know you know, you know
Sex Type Thing - Stone Temple Pilots
:iconduststorm10:
:D Thanks!

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I know you want what's on my mind
I know you like what's on my mind
I know what eats you up inside
I know you know, you know
Sex Type Thing - Stone Temple Pilots
:iconwouldyouplease:
I can totally identify with this.
:icongolfiscool:
This is beautiful! I normally don't view literature here at all but I'm glad I read this. FAV!

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[Pencil Drawings]

[My Drawing Forum]

"Don't tell me the sky's the limit when there's footprints on the moon!"
:iconduststorm10:
Wow thank you! You don't know how much that means to me! :)

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I know you want what's on my mind
I know you like what's on my mind
I know what eats you up inside
I know you know, you know
Sex Type Thing - Stone Temple Pilots
:iconduststorm10:
:D

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I know you want what's on my mind
I know you like what's on my mind
I know what eats you up inside
I know you know, you know
Sex Type Thing - Stone Temple Pilots

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